Talk:Peachtree Arcade/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:58, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

Almost there. JJonahJackalope won't have much to do. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:17, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

Site prior to the arcade

• Should it be "Dougherties" or "Doughertys"?
  • Changed to "Doughertys".
• That same decade, the three-story Concert Hall Building, which served as barracks and a prison during the American Civil War. This is an incomplete sentence missing a subject.
  • Fixed incomplete sentence.
• On the National Hotel... I agree with the 1902 date, having looked this up. An "old National Hotel building" is mentioned as being destroyed in a major fire that struck downtown Atlanta on December 9, 1902, having become the Snook & Austin furniture building at that time. See paragraph 4 of this clipping or the second linked page in this one:
• In 1901, a viaduct was constructed for Peachtree Street over the railroad tracks that improved pedestrian mobility in the area The way this is written, the railroad tracks improved mobility?. Maybe In 1901, a viaduct was constructed for Peachtree Street over the railroad tracks, improving pedestrian mobility in the area
  • Done.

Other items

• Add alt text to the images. (Not a GAN requirement, but something I generally suggest while you're here.) Two PD and one CC0 image.
  • Added alt text.
• References are archived where applicable.
• Earwig mostly flags book titles; no issues.

• Sammi Brie, just wanted to ping you to let you know that I have made some edits to the article to address your comments in this review. Thank you for initiating this review, and if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns, please let me know. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:25, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.