Talk:Peace Child International
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Personalmountains in topic Tagging for multiple issues
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Tagging for multiple issues edit
Problems:
- Mostly unsourced.
- First-person: "This legend represents the important role we believe young people can play in changing the world.
- Peacock: "empowers young people to take responsibility", "direct participation in the events that shape our world community", "The charity is concerned with youth empowerment", etc. Basically, everything that has empower in it.
- Cleanup: formatting in the congress series section is broken.
This whole article is unsourced, badly written and sounds like an advertisement mixed with a personal essay. pm (talk) 01:22, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- I think all four of these problems have now been addressed Sheywood (talk) 18:46, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
- It's a lot better than it was, but most of the references either come from the official website or others that seem to be sponsored by the organization. See WP:V and WP:PRIMARY. Also, ref #8 is a 404. pm (talk) 19:16, 16 April 2011 (UTC)