Talk:Pagoeta Natural Park

Close paraphrase

This article remains an unsuitable close paraphrase of the source. Rearranging paragraphs or changing words is not sufficient, the wording must be unique. At present, the article reads mostly like a (bad) machine translation from Spanish.

An example of the issues still present at the time of the review. The source reads:

On the other hand, the reconstruction in the vicinity of the water-run Agorregi forge, the origin of which dates back to the early 15th century, gives us an idea of an activity that was once enormously significant in the area. All valleys are dotted with installations devoted to charcoal making with wood from the nearby forests. In the park we can also observe the so-called "elurzuloak", which are kinds of fridge that provide information about how people in the old days managed to keep the food cool (by packing snow into the cavities prepared for this purpose during winter), when refrigerators had not been invented yet.

The article reads:

On the other hand, in the immediate reconstruction of the Agorregi forge-with water as an energy source, whose origin dates from the early fifteenth century, gives us an example of an activity that was extremely important, with facilities for all the valleys for the production of charcoal with wood from the nearby forests. In the park, where you can see thesame refrigerator, which show us how they managed the past, when there were no refrigerators, to obtain the "cold" winter snow collecting in hollows prepared for this purpose.

Bold are litteral copies, italics examples of close paraphrasing. The end result is also almost unintelligible at many places. MLauba ^(Talk) 16:09, 22 March 2011 (UTC)