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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): 17Jos1, Js2933. Peer reviewers: Ab2643, HemanthNannapaneni.

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Hemanth's Peer Review

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Hey!

I just finished reading your article, and its pretty good. Everything is really straightforward and unbiased. Your article has a good structure and your introduction part sums up everything pretty well. I would try and condense the intro part because its a little wordy and there are a few grammatical error, but other than that everything it looks good.

Hemanth — Preceding unsigned comment added by HemanthNannapaneni (talkcontribs) 20:31, 22 October 2017 (UTC)Reply