Talk:Over (Lindsay Lohan song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 18:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)

• Over is a song by American singer-songwriter and actress Lindsay Lohan ---> The song name should be in quotes
• The song was written by Lohan along with the song's producers Kara DioGuardi, and John Shanks
• Stylistic, "Over" is about how her boyfriend will not commit ---> What? Did you mean Lyrically?
• Critically, "Over" received positive reviews from music critics, who called it "catchy". Commercially, "Over" achieved moderate commercial success worldwide ---> Ok you really need to rephrase these double repeating opening lines
• with the former also providing bass, guitar, keyboards, and audio mixing ---> with the former playing the bass, guitar, keyboards, and doing the audio mixing, while the latter provided background vocals for the song
• Lohan's voice spanning from C4 to C5 ---> Lohan's voice spanning from C4 to C5
• You don't need the two subsections in the reception section
• In the United States, the song reached on Billboard??'?s Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles for three weeks--> In the United States, the song reached on Billboard??'?s Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles chart for three weeks
• Credits and personnel require en-dash
• Ref 10 for UK Singles chart does not work
• Correct other references per Checklinks

Onhold for seven days. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 14:14, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

All done. Alex ^{talk page!} 05:30, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

We are good to go Alex. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 05:36, 4 June 2015 (UTC)