Talk:OutRun Online Arcade/GA1

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I'm putting this on hold for one very minor prose change and one source:

• In the third paragraph of Gameplay references "the passenger", as if that gameplay element had already been established. Is Heart Attack the only mode with a passenger? I think it would read better as something along the lines of:

"In addition to attempting to complete certain stages, a passenger riding in the player's vehicle will frequently request certain stunts and actions."

• As far as I know there's not yet been any consensus on using Siliconera (reference 6) as a reliable source.

Reviewer: gakon^{5 (talk / contribs)} 17:46, 3 December 2010 (UTC)

I've made the requested changes. Both the prose and the reference were easy to replace. --Teancum (talk) 18:49, 3 December 2010 (UTC)

Cool, cool. Passed then. --gakon^{5 (talk / contribs)} 20:05, 3 December 2010 (UTC)