Talk:Ottoman ironclad Muin-i Zafer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:37, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:37, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

• No DABs, external link OK
• Image appropriately licensed.
• Add location of builder to infobox
  • Done
• Put lpp in infobox inside parentheses marks
  • Done
• Abbreviate indicated horsepower in the infobox
  • Done
• Watch rounding errors
  • Think I've got them
• The belt .6 m (2 ft) above the line and 1.2 m (4 ft) below, Missing a verb, I think. This may be a problem in your other Turkish ironclad articles as well. Probably best to put a zero in front of that .6 as well.
  • Good catch - will look at the rest of them too.
• Hobart Pasha took the fleet to the western Black Sea, where he was able to make a more aggressive use of it to support the Ottoman forces battling the Russians in the Caucasus. don't you mean eastern here?
  • Indeed I do.
• At the start of the Greco-Turkish War in February 1897, the Ottomans inspected the fleet and found that almost all of the vessels, including Avnillah, Copy-paste mistake?
  • Yup
• Ampersand in Refs for Greene--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:58, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
  • Added. Parsecboy (talk) 15:32, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
• Virtually certain that the guns aboard were 9 inch, not 9.1.
  • Fixed
    • And in the infobox?
      • Done.
• 76 mm (3 in) thick transverse Need the hyphen in the middle here. Use {{convert|24|ft|m|adj=mid|-X}}--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:50, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
  • Are you sure about the code? I can't get it to work.
    • Actually I think it's because it's abbreviated; only works if the unit is spelled out, so nevermind.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:13, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
      • That would do it. Parsecboy (talk) 18:18, 17 March 2017 (UTC)