Talk:Oppenheimer security clearance hearing/GA1
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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 02:35, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
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Just a few typos so far. Djmaschek (talk) 02:35, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
- Robert Oppenheimer, paragraph 3: "it was Lawrence that..." (who)
- Chevalier incident, paragraph 4: "foundJohn" (space)
Here are more. Djmaschek (talk) 03:14, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
- Postwar conflicts, paragraph 4: "developing the Super". I was born in the USA in 1953 but had no idea what "Super" meant. It later dawned on me that this must be "H-bomb" in American English. Please decipher this for American readers. Suggest: "Super (H-bomb)"
- Postwar conflicts, paragraph 5: "referred top" (to)
- Scope of testimony, last paragraph: "Robb to testified" (testify)
- The board's decision, paragraph 2: "conduct reflect" (reflects or reflect[s], since it's inside a quote)
That's all - just small stuff. Very good article. Djmaschek (talk) 03:29, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
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