Talk:Ontario Highway 407/GA2
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Floydian in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Rschen7754 (talk · contribs) 05:30, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
Standard disclaimer that I'm including some stuff that isn't necessarily in the GA criteria since I know you want to go further with this article.
- 1 dablink, 1 link that self-redirects.
- 3 dead links.
- Map could use a caption, and GIS sources.
- Lead
- distances calculated electronically. -> are calculated electronically
- The lead is a bit long for the length of the article.
- The central sections of Highway 407 opened 1997, between Highway 401 and Highway 404. -> opened in 1997 (if you're keeping the sentence at all)
- Route description
- six lane -> six-lane
- greenspace - ?
- east of which subdivisions line the south side - what sort of subdivisions?
- the highway straightens parallel to Dundas Street - word missing
- Second paragraph: two consecutive sentences start with It
- four lane
- immerses - not sure if that's the right word
- is weaved - doesn't seem right
- Tolls
- without the need for toll booth intermediaries - could be more clear
- against the requests of the province - the government? the people?
- History
- narrows into - merges into?
Should be a pass after these issues are resolved. --Rschen7754 06:16, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
- I'm loading this up to work on offline. Hopefully I'll have the changes made within a few days, but I'm going to kindly request that a leeway of the usual seven day limit be made due to my limited internet access. - Floydian τ ¢ 19:59, 26 November 2014 (UTC)
- Not a problem. --Rschen7754 00:21, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
- Just gotta deal with the deadlinks and map sources at this point. - Floydian τ ¢ 05:15, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
- Not a problem. --Rschen7754 00:21, 27 November 2014 (UTC)