Talk:One Thing (One Direction song)/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Littlemixlove in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Littlemixlove (talk · contribs) 11:11, 30 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Infobox
Both are added and flatlisted. — Robin (talk) 22:15, 2 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Lead
Background
  • "all of which" -> redundant.
    • No. It's a grammatically correct sentence if that's your reasoning.
  • Examiner.com is a blacklisted source, unfortunately.

It's just an interview which Carl Falk even spoke of on his Twitter account. — Robin (talk) 22:42, 30 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Composition and critical response
Commercial performance
  • "from the parent album" -> from its parent album.
  • "When "One Thing" and "What Makes You Beautiful" ..." -> One Direction became the second act of 2012 to have two singles simultaneously occupying the chart's top ten when "One Thing" was at number six and "What Makes You Beautiful" at number ten for the chart week ending 22 April 2012.
Music video
  • This section is extremely brief. More info to what happens in the video, its synopsis and reception?
    • I've grown wary of overtly detailed synopses + the music video just features them lurking around London. Only found one review.
  • A snapshot from the video maybe?
Live performance
  • Some more details or reviews about the performances?

I like it this way; short and concise. — Robin (talk) 22:42, 30 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Chart
  • South Korea (Gaon) would look better
References
I'm putting the article on hold! Good luck! :-) — LittleMixLovethese wings are made to fly! 13:40, 30 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the thorough review! I've answered all the queries. — Robin (talk) 22:42, 30 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
Sorry for the delayed response! Hopefully I'll be able to pass the article after your next reply! Thanks again for the hard work on the article, even if it as brief as it is. :-)  — LittleMixLovethese wings are made to fly! 11:36, 2 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Passing!  — LittleMixLovethese wings are made to fly! 23:19, 2 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
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