Talk:One More Cup of Coffee (Valley Below)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 12:39, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Lead

• "Dylan said the song was 'probably' influenced by" "probably" should be in quotation marks; alas, "probably" may be redundant anyways
  • Removed "probably". BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:14, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Background and recording

• "his first releases to achieve this" does this mean it was his first two albums that reached No. 1?
  • I've tweaked this a bit, and added which albums. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
• A link to Hebraic (or a wikitionary link) could be useful
  • I've linked it - in the text following the quote rather than in the quote, per MOS:LINKQUOTE
• Link Andalusian chord progression
  • Linked. (In the quote this time, as no other opportunity).) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
• "Stoner told interviewer" the interviewer
  • Fixed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Live performances

• No issues.

Critical reception

• ""sing not so much with as AT each other"" I think this is more mixed/negative than positive
  • I've added to this, which hopefully shows it was a positive review. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Cover versions

• Link spaghetti western
  • Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Sources

• The Zollo source is not used anywhere in the article.
  • I've added it in, even through strictly speaking it's redundant, as the Margotin/Guedson source has the whole quote. The 1991 Zollo interview was original source. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Overall

• Putting this  On hold for seven days. Ippantekina (talk) 11:08, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Many thanks, Ippantekina. I've replied above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

    Thanks for addressing my comments. Passing now-- Ippantekina (talk) 05:15, 11 September 2022 (UTC)