Talk:On Her Majesty's Secret Service (film)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Matthew RD 02:58, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Hello, I shall be conducting this review. I hope to start soon, probably tomorrow. Thanks, -- Matthew RD 02:58, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for waiting. I'll get some reviewing done; this is how the article fairs against the GA criteria;

1. Well written: See notes below
2. Sources and verifiability: ✓ Pass
3. Broad in coverage: ✓ Pass
4. Neutral: ✓ Pass
5. Stability: No edit wars, just work from the usual suspects. ✓ Pass
6. Images: ✓ Pass

• "where the sets don't look like sets" should end with reference, like the last 007 film I reviews.  Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
• Same for "change[d] his mind all the time, but he had to do what I wanted him to do."  Done (removed quote and re-worked sentence) - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
• And the same goes for (in reception section);
  • "there are moments when one yearns for a little of his louche panache."  Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "Lazenby is that man, and his performance in superb."  Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "and who actually dares to think that one woman who is his equal is better than a thousand part-time playmates."  Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "but I think that it still might be the best Bond film, as many Bond cultists claim."  Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "He looks uncomfortably in the part like a size four foot in a size ten gumboot."  Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
• Who are the Propellerheads, what genre of music do they specialise in?  Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:50, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

And that's all that needs doing. Nice work so far. As always I'll place it on hold and leave you to deal with them. -- Matthew RD 18:24, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for dealing with them quickly. I'll pass it. Good job! -- Matthew RD 19:22, 14 August 2011 (UTC)