Talk:Olaf's Frozen Adventure/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:39, 22 July 2021 (UTC)

• "who praised for its" → "who praised it for its"
• #Plot is 296 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
• "Olaf and Sven decides" → "Olaf and Sven decide"
• Add a serial comma between "Christmas, Hanukkah and Winter solstice".
• "a television special, to be aired on ABC, produced by Roy Conli, and directed by Kevin Deters and Stevie Wermers" – reword
• "limited time theatrical release" → "limited theatrical release"
• "the story follows Olaf as he tries to find the best holiday traditions for Anna, Elsa, and Kristoff" — is a summary needed?
• – make a WP:CITEBUNDLE.

•  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 01:48, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

• Resolve the "" tag.
• Add a hyphen between "limited time" in #Release.
• Remove the links to Pixar and Coco in #Release (WP:OVERLINK).
• "apologies, and removed the short from exhibition" → "apologies and removed the short from the exhibition"
• "It was viewed 5.64 million times." → "It was viewed by an estimated 5.64 million people in the United States."
• The Rotten Tomatoes score is wrong (actually 7 reviews, not 10; 5.1 average, not 5.12).
• "betteroff" → "better off"
• "contributions on the project" → "contributions to the project"
• "incoperated" → "incorporated"
• "as Tesco-exclusive" → "as a Tesco-exclusive"
• "the United Kingdom December 7, 2017" → "the United Kingdom on December 7, 2017"
• Metro has been found to be an unreliable source.
• Update the British Board of Film Classification link.
• Sources are archived.
• #12 should be properly cited.
• Mark references from The Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
• Is LaughingPlace reliable?
• Those are my notes. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:23, 22 July 2021 (UTC)

  @Some Dude From North Carolina:,  Done. Wingwatchers (talk) 21:10, 22 July 2021 (UTC)