Talk:Norman Ramsey Jr./GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:00, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

• Missing "the" he was awarded Nobel prize in physics in 1944
  • Y Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• This is odd: and moved to the University of Illinois Got a job there? If so, as what?
  • Y Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• A description of the P-61 as a night fighter would be better than just "aircraft"
  • Y Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• Provide conversion into English measurements for radar wavelengths on first use.
  • Y Okay, but no one then or now ever used the old measurements for radio. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• What kind of English are you using here? I'm seeing some Britishisms like prise (pry)
  • Y Corrected. I try AmEng, but I'm not very fluent in it, so you'll have to Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• the SCR-584 radar or give the designation earlier when discussing the P-61.
  • Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• Typo Ramsey drew up an tables of and as the Parsons's deputy and his PHD student
  • Y Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• No dup links, couple of DABs that look to be circular.
  • Help! Cannot find the last one. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:57, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
• One broken link.
  • Y Removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:55, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 07:39, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

Fix this: Typo Ramsey drew up an tables of and we'll be done here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:46, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

Nevermind, my mistake.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:47, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

All done then. I've appealed for help on the redirect. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:55, 7 July 2013 (UTC)