Talk:Norcliffe Norcliffe/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:40, 24 January 2023 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:40, 24 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • Images appropriately licensed
  • This is a pretty short article, I suggest that you delete the ones in the main body that duplicate those in the lede.
  • Removed some of the more common links from the body, but left some I think are worth repeating despite the length of the article
  • surgeon, with it for a while being thought that he would die from his wound awkward
  • Reworded.
  • Add OCLC numbers for all sources that lack them or an ISBN
  • Done.