Talk:No Time to Bleed/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer:

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• General

Per WP:Album "Professional reviews should no longer be included in the infobox", however they can go in an independent infobox at "Reception" section. For examples see other articles like Thriller (album).

All [sic] references need work, publisher, date (if it has them) and accessdate.

• Lead

at #32 -> number 32

the Billboard Top 200 -> Billboard 200

• Background

Ref 9 goes to an archive.

and played the song "Wake Up" and on June 1, -> and played the song "Wake Up", (or ," whatever you like) and on June 1,

played the song "Wake Up" ... for the songs "Wake Up", -> Shouldn't the first "Wake Up" be wikilinked?

June 1, 2009, the band uploaded the song onto their official merchandise -> How exactly you know the release date?

All five editions of No Time to Bleed were released on June 30, 2009. -> Which versions? If you mean the five versions that are written at the lead, they have to be written here too.

it made its worldwide premiere through Fearnet on July 27, 2009 and was directed by David Brodski.[12][13] -> it made its worldwide premiere through Fearnet on July 27, 2009,[12] and was directed by David Brodski.[13]

its release June of that year -> missing word.

• Musical themes

first album The Cleansing -> overlinked

recording of a 911 emergency phone call recorded on February 18, 2009 -> recording of a 911 emergency phone call recorded on February 18, 2009[21]

ref 22 need a fix

• Reception

at #32 -> number 32

Phil Freeman of Alternative Press stated that the "thunderous drums" were the "best thing about the album" and even put focus into instrumental track, "...And Then She Bled" stating that it's "a moody instrumental, reminiscent of Slipknot's quieter moments."[2] -> Did you mean [3]?

"surprisingly varied array of guitar riff textures, liable to impress the likes of Dimebag Darrell or Tool's Adam Jones. -> miss something.

at times (e.g. "Wake Up" and the title track), -> at times (e.g. 'Wake Up' and the title track),

• Track listing

All lyrics written by Mitch Lucker, all music composed by Suicide Silence. ->

• Personnel

No source.

Several issues, on hold until July 3, 2010. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 06:10, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

I made a little copy-edit, I stressed the resolved problems, but the references still needing help. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 23:57, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

Since the tags {{Expand section}} (I'm not failing the nomination for this) and {{Citation style}} are in the article, I have to fail the nomination. It is important fix the references for make clear when, where, how, and who made the work. The article fails the criteria 1.B. If you feel this is in error, you may request a Good article reassessment. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 01:11, 4 July 2010 (UTC)