Talk:No Meals on Wheels/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Tbhotch in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TbhotchTalk C. 20:23, 2 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
  • Lead
wheelchair friends, that Peter decides -> This line is missing something like "with this", "so", "after this", or something that connect both sentences.*
The episode was written by Mike Henry an directed by Greg Colton -> typo
  • Cultural references
Super Friends.[5][4] -> Super Friends.[4][5]
  • Reception
Maybe the line -> it was the 35th most-watched episodie of the week could be added.
  • References
All need the work, where is possible.
  • Categories
Family Guy (season 5) episodes | 2007 television episodes -> 2007 television episodes | Family Guy (season 5) episodes

Practically only there is an issue (*), is well written, so I put this on hold one week. TbhotchTalk C. 20:23, 2 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

everything execpt the refrences are fixed can you speify about refrences. --Pedro J. the rookie 20:56, 2 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
E.g. Yahoo TV made the work on ref. 1, the publisher is fine. in ref 4 TV Squad made the work, and Weblogs, Inc. is the publisher. In ref 3, MovieWeb made the work and MovieWeb, Inc is the publisher. TbhotchTalk C. 21:08, 2 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
Done. Gage (talk) 06:24, 3 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
Ref 7 need publisher. And that all. TbhotchTalk C. 06:57, 3 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
I belif its done. --Pedro J. the rookie 07:34, 3 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
Done. Gage (talk) 13:24, 3 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
Ok, for me it's all fine. So I pass its nomination. TbhotchTalk C. 17:28, 3 August 2010 (UTC)Reply