Talk:No. 84 Wing RAAF/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Ian Rose in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:09, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:09, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
- Commencing the following month, Sounds odd, how about "Beginning"?
- No. 32 Squadron completed upgrade from the HS 748 Perhaps "completed its conversion from"?
- Typo desseminating
- Pics appropriately licensed.
- No DABs, no duplicate links, external links good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:12, 25 May 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, will do. Tks/cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:57, 25 May 2013 (UTC)
- All done, along with a little more detail from WWII. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:42, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, will do. Tks/cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:57, 25 May 2013 (UTC)