Talk:Niko Hansen/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:23, 1 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Going to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 20:23, 1 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lede

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  • "He also appeared during the collegiate offseason with Seattle Sounders FC U-23." - He also appeared with Seattle Sounders FC U-23 during the collegiate offseason.
  Done, changed to recommendation.

College and amateur

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  • "Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut, bagging a goal" - earning
  Done, changed to "tallying a goal".
  • "Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut" - put the acroynms of Conference USA in parentheses after its inital mention
  Done
  Done, linked in the sentence that reads "...and tallied an assist in his NCAA Tournament debut against George Mason."
  • "he was named Third Team All-CUSA." - named to the
  Done, changed to "he was named to the All-CUSA Third Team."
  • "but was named Second Team All-CUSA with final stats of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances." - , with a total of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances.
  Done
  • "Hansen tallied a career-high 13 goals on the year" - during
  Done
  • "and a First Team All-CUSA nod." - change this to and was featured in the First Team ALL-CUSA.
  Done, changed to "...and was named to the All-CUSA First Team."
  • "He finished his collegiate career with 28 goals in 79 appearances." - this sentence needs to be cited to a reliable source.
  Done, added reference to his New Mexico profile.

Seattle Sounders FC U-23

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  • "Hansen turned out for Seattle Sounders FC U-23 in the Premier Development League." - played
  Done, changed to recommendation.

Columbus Crew SC

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  • "Hansen missed multiple matches during the summer" - How many matches exactly?
  Done, changed to "Hansen missed 14 matches during the summer...}}
  • "then suffered a thigh strain" - and then
  Done, changed to recommendation.
  • "He found his form in autumn," - How about mid to late 2018 to comply with MOS:SEASON?
  Done, changed to "He found his form in the later part of the year..."
  • Delink the second mention of Justin Meram in this section
  Done, delinked the mention in the first sentence of the second paragraph.

References

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  • References 34 and 35 need to have an access date for consistency with the other citations
Partially   Done – added accessdate for the Soccerway profile, but Template:MLS player does not take the accessdate parameter. I could format this as a standalone reference instead of using the template, if necessary?

Good work so far. Going to put this on hold until all of the above points have been answered. MWright96 (talk) 18:01, 2 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: I've gone through and corrected just about all of your points. Just the one outstanding issue to address in the references, but other than that I think I've covered everything. I see that you've got six reviews currently out, so thanks for getting this one up as quickly as you did. 21.colinthompson (talk) 19:23, 2 February 2019 (UTC)Reply