Talk:New York State Route 373/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Mitchazenia in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

Hi, I'll be reviewing your article today! :)

  • Can you get the date of the article in reference 6? (^ "115 Rescued in Ferry Crash", New York Times, p. 25.)
  • "forcing the evacuation of 124 people; 115 were rescued." 124 people were evacuated from the boat or the shore? 115 people were rescued from the boat or shore? Were there any casualties?
  • The article calls the road both "Route 273" and "NY 23." Pick one.
  • "where it intersects with a few more local streets and turns northward for a short time." Use more precise language rather than phrases like "a few" and "for a short time."
  • Could you get a picture? Maybe even one of a ferry used there. The best picture of course would be of one of the intersections or a stretch of highway.

Other than that, this article is good. I'll put it on hold until you finish the improvements. Malinaccier (talk) 22:49, 7 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Done on everything excepting the pic - which was not found and the Route 273 thing - which doesn't exist in the article.Mitch32(UP) 23:02, 7 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
Oof. A horrible set of typos. I meant NY 373 and Route 373. Malinaccier (talk) 23:34, 7 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
Fixed.Mitch32(UP) 23:37, 7 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
What about "Route 373 was assigned by 1936 on its current routing."? Malinaccier (talk) 23:39, 7 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
Whoopsie - fixed again.Mitch32(UP) 23:40, 7 July 2008 (UTC)Reply