Talk:Nero Julius Caesar/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by SpartaN in topic Prose Suggestions

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:35, 10 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 01:35, 10 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y (Highest rate is 2.9%, due only to the title of citation being in the work cited.)
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No Dead links  Y
  • Images appropriately licensed  Y

Prose Suggestions

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  • He and his brother enjoyed accelerated political careers as heirs of the emperor. Suggest As a result of being heirs of the emperor, he and his brother enjoyed accelerated political careers.
  • one-time governor of Syria add a the in front of this.
  • began bickering and entered a feud during which Drusus became Suggest began bickering and entered a feud. During this time, Drusus became
  • By this time his comma between time and his
  • Like members of the imperial family, Sejanus' birthday was to be honored. Suggest Sejanus' birthday was honored as if he were a member of the imperial family.
  • the exact reasons for this remain unclear. change to the exact reasoning for which remains unclear.
  • @SpartaN: That is all my comments, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 23:34, 16 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Iazyges: I appreciate the review. Implementing changes now. SpartaN (talk) 01:42, 17 January 2018 (UTC)Reply