Talk:Navy of the Independent State of Croatia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 04:02, 11 January 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 04:02, 11 January 2017 (UTC)

• Section 1;
  • It consisted of seven river stations – at Sisak; suggest an emdash instead of en dash
  • Above suggestion follows for "two river gunboats – Ustaša and Bosut" and "two river minelayers – Zagreb and Zrinski"
• Section 2;
  • numbering only 1,262 in September 1943; what is this count? men, ships or material?
  • MTB; mention in full on the first instant
  • 8 September 1944, 31 December 1944, December 1944; the year may be dropped per MOS:DATEVAR
• Section 3;
  • Link the ranks Commander and Captain
• Section 4; equivalent modern day ranks for Kontraadmiral and Kapetan Bojnogbroda
• 9.9% violation unlikely.
• All images are licensed well, with appropriate information of designs.
• External links are good and no dab links found.

Well done, excellent article. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:10, 11 January 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Krishna. All done, I made them all spaced ndashes for consistency. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:08, 11 January 2017 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 11:26, 13 January 2017 (UTC)