Talk:Nature connectedness
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editHey! I spent a long time editing your work mostly because something unexpected, unexplainable happened and suddenly I saw each of the sections twice. I think there were at least two people editing your article at the same time. Fortunately, I managed to fix it (at least I think I did).
Here are some editing comments I have:
- I adjusted wording here and there - mostly minor things. I also removed “you” from the text and substituted it with “one” because it sounds more appropriate for the Wikipedia (in my opinion).
- I used bullet points to present components of nature connectedness in your first paragraph, so it is easier to read and so it is easier to find information one wants.
- I added “Elizabeth Nisbet’s webpage” to the link you provided because usually there is some text people can click to go to a specific webpage (instead of just [1]). I did similar thing to many of other links. I also fixed some broken links.
Please feel free to change anything back if you do not like my changes.
Few suggestions:
- I am not sure such detailed descriptions of measures are needed. Shouldn’t you include only overall description of each scale (so people can find which scale is better to use for what they want to study) and leave out examples of items and statistical details? (The amount of measurement information is overwhelming.)
- You should probably rename “Interesting websides” as “See also:” or “External links:” - names commonly used within Wikipedia. Within that list you should provide a link’s name instead of a webpage address, e.g. Government Environmental Page and link imbedded within that name (there is a “link” button which lets you do it really easily).
- Within your references, journal names and their volume numbers should be italicized according to the APA style. (I changed it in some of your references.)
- This is really minor but shouldn't you put the picture a bit higher in your text, instead of it being next to the references list?
Sorry for being so critical... :_( (Kasob (Kasob (talk) 04:51, 21 March 2012 (UTC))
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