Talk:Motifs in the James Bond film series/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ktlynch (talk · contribs) 17:34, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

This article looks rather interesting, I'd be happy to review it. Its detail may mean the review will take a few days. To begin I'm going to make some changes to the structure, if anyone does not agree please do leave your remarks here. Best, --Ktlynch (talk) 17:34, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

1. a)The article reads quite poorly. There are many copy mistakes, both silly errors and poor punctutation, larger syntax ones which sometimes cloud the meaning. Sometimes they're stylistic points, but the piece does not flow like it should. I've quite a lot of experience copy-editing film articles and am happy to do it myself, please explain points of dispute. Best, --Ktlynch (talk) 14:37, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Hi, I'm not sure there are any points of dispute - I copy edited a couple of your edits in order to improve the flow and to change a spelling mistake. I look forward to seeing the rest of the review. - SchroCat (^ • @) 10:16, 26 January 2012 (UTC)

It's coming up to a week since any part of the review was undertaken: just wondering when you're going to pick up on this again? Thanks - SchroCat (^ • @) 12:06, 30 January 2012 (UTC)