Talk:Monster (Kanye West song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 21:31, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Initial Comments

• Lead

• The lead is four paragraphs long which is the maximum for an article of any size. This article isn't particularly long; could this be merged and edited to comply with WP:LEAD? Three paragraphs would probably be sufficient enough

 Done

• Background

•  Done

• Composition

• "In his deepest, most intimidating voice" sounds very journalistic and certainly isn't encyclopedic, this needs changing.

• Reception

•  Done

• Music video

•  Done

• Charts and Release History

•  Done

• References

•  Done

Overall Summary

GA review Final Summary
It is reasonably well written. a (Is there clear sentences, spelling and grammar?): Y b (Does it comply with MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists?): Y It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (Is there a references section?): Y b (Are there citations for quotes/statistics/challenging info?): Y c (Does it contain no original research?): Y It is broad in its coverage. a (Does it cover the major aspects of the topic?): Y b (Does it use summary style?): Y It follows the neutral point of view policy. (Are points made with due weight?): Y It is stable. (Are there no edit wars, etc?): Y It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (Do the images have appropriate fair-use rationales?): Y b (Do the images have suitable captions?): Y
Overall: Pass/Fail: Pass
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Fixed the lead, and removed the questionable sentence. Bruce Campbell (talk) 21:14, 4 September 2012 (UTC)