Talk:Mom and Pop Art/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: —Andrew_stalk 23:59, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

• One dablink found and fixed; please check

Plot

• "Astrid Weller (played by Isabella Rossellini)" - wouldn't 'voiced' be more appropriate?
• "Homer's exhibit goes to the Louvre: American Style museum and when Mr. Burns buys his work. " - huh?
• "Consequently, Homer becomes a success" - is this really needed?
• "Arrivederci Roma" - per MoS, should be in quote marks, not italics
• "On the Simpsons' garage door, "Start here tomorrow 7/17/95" is written in blue paint. The date refers to Scully and Julie Thacker's anniversary, which was on July 17, 1995" - how is this relevant to the episode?

It is only mentioned in this episode. Perhaps it would fit better in Cultural references?

Oh. Then stipulate that the writing was only on the garage in this episode. —Andrew_stalk 09:35, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

• Steven Dean Moore's participation in the DVD commentary is not supported by ref.
• The DVD Town ref should link the page 2, where this episode's comment is, and indicate page=2 in the citation template.

Nice work, on hold, awaiting improvements. —Andrew_stalk 00:34, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I've answered most of your concerns, and there was only one that I was a bit unsure about. Thanks again! Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:28, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

All good, passing now. Congratulations and keep up the good work! —Andrew_stalk 09:55, 23 July 2011 (UTC)