Talk:Moltke-class battlecruiser/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Wandalstouring in topic GA Review

GA Review

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  • It's a German ship. They used and use the metric system, so all data must also be given in SI units(you can keep other units as additional information).
  • The all-big-gun battleship concept should be linked and it merits an explanation why Tirpitz wanted ten smaller guns instead of eigth big. That's taotally against the zeitgeist. Wandalstouring (talk) 09:22, 19 March 2009 (UTC)Reply
    • I flipped the armor figures in the infobox, but couldn't find any others that weren't metric first. Can you point them out? I linked to "all-big-gun" and added a footnote explaining it. Tirpitz thought that the 28cm guns were sufficient to fight even battleships, and that since the German fleet was always at a numerical disadvantage, it would be better to have more guns rather than larger guns. I added that explanation to the article (not sure how/why I missed that previously). Thanks for your comments. Parsecboy (talk) 12:10, 19 March 2009 (UTC)Reply
      • All issues with the measurement units have been solved.
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  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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  4. It is stable.
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  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Wandalstouring (talk) 15:58, 25 March 2009 (UTC)Reply