Talk:Mirror (Sigrid song)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:20, 27 August 2022 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

I will crack on with this one tomorrow! --K. Peake 20:20, 27 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Mention in the first sentence that it is from her second studio album, How to Let Go (2022)
  • "from her second studio album, How to Let Go (2022); marking" → "from the album, marking"
  • The writing sentence should be the second of the lead, followed by the inspiration one and then release
  • ""Mirror" touches on themes" → "it touches on themes" but should there really be a comma before the last theme?
  • "Its instrumentation consists of" → "The instrumentation consists of" swapping this with the above sentence because comp comes before lyrics
  • "Sigrid came up with" → "She came up with"
  • "Commercially, it reached" → "Commercially, the song reached"
  • Wikilink music video
  • "premiered alongside the single. It depicts" → "premiered alongside it. The video depicts"
  • "Sigrid performed "Mirror"" → "Sigrid performed the song"
  • "She also included the song" → "She also included it"

Background and release

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Composition and lyrics

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  • ""Mirror" has been described" → "Musically, "Mirror" has been described"
  • Should there really be a comma before self-love?
  • Swap [11] and [12] so they are in a corresponding order with the info
  • "Sigrid wrote it following" → "Sigrid wrote the song following"
  • Stylize as i-D instead
  • "who you are."" → "who you are"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "claimed that the song is" → "asserted that the song is"
  • Remove the "darts and flutters" part because that is not appropriate for comp
  • "to the forefront."" → "to the forefront"."
  • Pipe chorus to Refrain
  • "Jason Lipshutz writing for Billboard asserted" → "Jason Lipshutz, for Billboard, asserted"
  • "and declares "I love" → "and declares, "I love"
  • "in the mirror!"." → "in the mirror!" since this ends the quote

Reception

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  • The release year of Future Nostalgia is not in the quote; maybe end it earlier to add this and also mention it being a Dua Lipa album?
  • I don't think the Smith review should be the second one since others focusing on the disco sound are more suitable for thematic order
  • "improvements and recalibrations."" → "improvements and recalibrations"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "the song's bridge is "an homage" → "the song's bridge is a "homage"
  • Instead of English publication before DIY, write a reviewer for
  • Do something similar to the above instead of writing British radio station before Capital FM
  • "49 in the United Kingdom and 76" → "number 49 in the United Kingdom and number 76"

Music video and live performances

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  • Wikilink music video
  • "Sigrid is performing various activities," → "Sigrid performs various activities,"
  • Stylize as i-D instead
  • "stated that "for [her] it's" → "stated, "For me, it's" to make it clear this is quoting his point of view
  • Remove British music television show introduction to Later... with Jools Holland
  • "She gave a performance of "Mirror" on 16 July 2021 during" → "Sigrid gave a performance of "Mirror" on 16 July 2021 for" but remove the introduction to The One Show

Track listing

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Good

Year-end charts

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  • Year-end chart performance → 2021 year-end chart performance

Release history

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References

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Final comments and verdict

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