Talk:Milk Bar (bakery)/Archive 1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by BrieShell47 in topic Tosi
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Tosi
Looking good! Since the history begins with Tosi, I would also mention her in the lead. -Reagle (talk) 13:00, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
This is looking great so far! I noticed the page is flagged for using a promotional tone and I can see where words like "master-mind" might be too bias. I think you should work on the tone of this article to make it more factual and neutral, the "Wikipedia tone." Brianne Shelley (talk) 16:55, 27 March 2015 (UTC)
Famous
Perhaps you might want to add in what Momofuku Milk Bar is famous for (famous desserts). You might want to look at Dominique Ansel's page under the section "Popular pastries and desserts" Nsiu (talk) 16:18, 17 March 2015 (UTC)