Talk:Mickey Guyton/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by BlueMoonset in topic GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: The Most Comfortable Chair (talk · contribs) 01:47, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
Hello. I will be reviewing this. Thank you. — The Most Comfortable Chair 01:47, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- Hello TenPoundHammer, before I begin the review, I had some concerns regarding the coverage of this article. The article jumps from her childhood details to her American Idol audition, which was in 2009, before talking about her career from 2011. The article should be covering what Guyton did from after she finished high school (I presume this to be around early 2000s) and before she moved to Los Angeles in 2011. — The Most Comfortable Chair 05:51, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- @ChrisTofu11961: did most of the textual work here, so pinging him here too. I mostly did the nomination and finding the picture. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 16:31, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- @TenPoundHammer:@The Most Comfortable Chair: Hello! Thanks for reviewing. I will be out of town over this next week, but I will try to make edits as much as possible when I return! ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 03:16, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- @The Most Comfortable Chair: ChrisTofu11961 has been busy so I can tend to the review if you need me to. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 22:30, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking it up, TenPoundHammer. My concern about the lack of coverage on her life and activities from early 2000s to 2011 still stands. Before I conduct a full review, I would suggest adding a couple of paragraphs on what she had been up to and if she was working towards a musical career during that period. — The Most Comfortable Chair 07:55, 26 June 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, I'll take a look at it. I don't remember seeing much among what I could find, but I'm sure I could beef it up at least a little. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 03:43, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
- @The Most Comfortable Chair: I was not able to find much about her early years that isn't already in the article. This shouldn't be a sticking point, as it seems to be about on par with other GA-class country singer articles like Tracy Lawrence or Eddy Raven with regards to the subject's formative years. If @ChrisTofu11961: is able to find something that I couldn't, then he's definitely welcome to add it. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 22:17, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- @The Most Comfortable Chair: @TenPoundHammer: Hello! I agree that it was tough to find out a lot of information on her early life. I think that's because her career did not fully start until 2011, which is when she was in her mid 20's. However, I did find some information from a recent Los Angeles Times article that highlights that she was a background vocalist and appeared in the soundtrack of a film. So I added that. Besides that, it was a challenge. From writing musician's articles, I have found that there is limited information on their "early life" unless the artist has written a biography or autobiography. Guyton has neither of those. Honestly the real meat of this article is in the "career" section. Most readers will find that section more informative I believe. ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 01:08, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
- TenPoundHammer and ChrisTofu11961, thank you for your work and comments. On a cursory look, the article looks great and should pass. I will begin a full review soon. — The Most Comfortable Chair 13:21, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
- @The Most Comfortable Chair: @TenPoundHammer: Hello! I agree that it was tough to find out a lot of information on her early life. I think that's because her career did not fully start until 2011, which is when she was in her mid 20's. However, I did find some information from a recent Los Angeles Times article that highlights that she was a background vocalist and appeared in the soundtrack of a film. So I added that. Besides that, it was a challenge. From writing musician's articles, I have found that there is limited information on their "early life" unless the artist has written a biography or autobiography. Guyton has neither of those. Honestly the real meat of this article is in the "career" section. Most readers will find that section more informative I believe. ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 01:08, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
- @The Most Comfortable Chair: I was not able to find much about her early years that isn't already in the article. This shouldn't be a sticking point, as it seems to be about on par with other GA-class country singer articles like Tracy Lawrence or Eddy Raven with regards to the subject's formative years. If @ChrisTofu11961: is able to find something that I couldn't, then he's definitely welcome to add it. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 22:17, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, I'll take a look at it. I don't remember seeing much among what I could find, but I'm sure I could beef it up at least a little. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 03:43, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking it up, TenPoundHammer. My concern about the lack of coverage on her life and activities from early 2000s to 2011 still stands. Before I conduct a full review, I would suggest adding a couple of paragraphs on what she had been up to and if she was working towards a musical career during that period. — The Most Comfortable Chair 07:55, 26 June 2021 (UTC)
- @The Most Comfortable Chair: have you been able to get back to this yet? Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 00:34, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
Review will not be completed edit
I pinged The Most Comfortable Chair on their talk page, and they will not be returning to this review. Accordingly, I have returned the nomination to the pool of those awaiting a reviewer without any loss of seniority; the next review will take place on a different page from this one. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:11, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.