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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:37, 14 September 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I'll make straightforward copyedits as I go and post queries below. Please revert if I change meaning inadvertently. Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:37, 14 September 2010 (UTC)
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This is the largest and brightest galaxy within the northern Virgo Cluster, located about 55 million light years away from Earth - the way it reads, it isn't clear whether M87 or the Virgo Cluster (or both) is what is 55 million light years from earth."
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Messier 87 galaxy has no distinctive dust lanes... - do we need the "galaxy" here? Not written as such elsewhere. Done
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- This identification was confirmed by 1953 - odd wording. You mean "The soruce was confirmed as coming from M87" (?) Done, reworded.
- This identification was confirmed by 1953 - odd wording. You mean "The soruce was confirmed as coming from M87" (?)
- The only known visual observation of the jet was by Russian-American astronomer Otto Struve using the 254 cm (100 in) Hooker telescope - how/why?
- and may indicate that the black hole has been accelerated by the jet - I don't follow - you mean "moved" or "displeced" or ..what?
- The Virgo Cluster section could be expanded a little - M87's role in it, closest neighbours etc.
Okay - typing "Messier 87" into the Web of Science search engine yields the following:
1. Title: STRUCTURAL PARAMETERS OF THE MESSIER 87 GLOBULAR CLUSTERS Author(s): Madrid JP, Harris WE, Blakeslee JP, et al. Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 705 Issue: 1 Pages: 237-244 Published: NOV 1 2009 Times Cited: 4
2. Title: Radio Imaging of the Very-High-Energy gamma-Ray Emission Region in the Central Engine of a Radio Galaxy Author(s): Acciari VA, Aliu E, Arlen T, et al. Source: SCIENCE Volume: 325 Issue: 5939 Pages: 444-448 Published: JUL 24 2009 Times Cited: 19
3. Title: A method for deriving accurate gas-phase abundances for the multiphase interstellar galactic halo Author(s): Howk JC, Sembach KR, Savage BD Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 637 Issue: 1 Pages: 333-341 Part: Part 1 Published: JAN 20 2006 Times Cited: 11
4. Title: THE MORPHOLOGY OF ELLIPTIC GALAXIES INDIFFERENT ENVIRONMENTS Author(s): DAVOUST E Conference Information: World of Galaxies II Meeting, SEP 05-07, 1994 LYON, FRANCE Source: ASTROPHYSICAL LETTERS & COMMUNICATIONS Volume: 31 Issue: 1-6 Pages: 183-186 Published: 1995 Times Cited: 0
5. Title: HIGH-RESOLUTION OBSERVATION OF THE OPTICAL JET OF THE GALAXY MESSIER 87 Author(s): LELIEVRE G, NIETO JL, WLERICK G, et al. Source: COMPTES RENDUS DE L ACADEMIE DES SCIENCES SERIE II Volume: 296 Issue: 23 Pages: 1779-1786 Published: 1983 Times Cited: 12
6. Title: THE HALO GLOBULAR-CLUSTERS OF THE GIANT ELLIPTICAL GALAXY MESSIER 87 Author(s): STROM SE, FORTE JC, HARRIS WE, et al. Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 245 Issue: 2 Pages: 416-& Published: 1981 Times Cited: 123
7. Title: PHOTOMETRIC ANALYSIS OF THE JET IN MESSIER-87 Author(s): DEVAUCOULEURS G, NIETO JL Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 231 Issue: 2 Pages: 364-371 Published: 1979 Times Cited: 48
8. Title: LUMINOSITY DISTRIBUTION IN THE CENTRAL REGIONS OF MESSIER-87 - ISOTHERMAL CORE, POINT SOURCE, OR BLACK-HOLE Author(s): DEVAUCOULEURS G, NIETO JL Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 230 Issue: 3 Pages: 697-712 Published: 1979 Times Cited: 54
9. Title: ENERGY-DISTRIBUTION OF JET IN MESSIER 87 Author(s): KANEKO N, NISHIMUR.M, TOYAMA K Source: PUBLICATIONS OF THE ASTRONOMICAL SOCIETY OF JAPAN Volume: 25 Issue: 2 Pages: 175-180 Published: 1973 Times Cited: 5
10. Title: PHOTOMETRY OF OUTER CORONA OF MESSIER 87 Author(s): DEVAUCOU.G Source: ASTROPHYSICAL LETTERS Volume: 4 Issue: 1 Pages: 17-& Published: 1969 Times Cited: 22
11. Title: MESSIER-87 - GALAXY OF GREATEST KNOWN MASS Author(s): BRANDT JC, ROOSEN RG Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 156 Issue: 2P2 Pages: L59-& Published: 1969 Times Cited: 18
12. Title: ON SYNCHROTROIN RADIATION FROM MESSIER-87 Author(s): BURBIDGE GR Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 124 Issue: 2 Pages: 416-429 Published: 1956 Times Cited: 143
13. Title: POLARIZATION IN THE JET OF MESSIER-87 Author(s): BAADE W Source: ASTROPHYSICAL JOURNAL Volume: 123 Issue: 3 Pages: 550-& Published: 1956 Times Cited: 79
- Why on Earth would you run such a search? For a start, the astronomy databases (ADS, SIMBAD, NED) are far more sensible places to look than WoS. Secondly, there are thousands of papers on M87. Here is a straightforward ADS object search, which found 4238 papers. Even restricting the search to only papers with 'M87' or 'Messier 87' in the title (let alone the abstract) leaves 913 papers [1]. Good luck digesting all of those! Modest Genius talk 16:03, 16 September 2010 (UTC)
- (belatedly) I have used WoS for biology articles, my usual area of editing on wikipedia. I am a bit of a neophyte on astronomy articles. But in any case, all of these show some other material worth looking at. Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:55, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
- it's okayish but could do with some tightening - Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- I am sure there is a bunch of material for this article which could be added, particularly on components section. - Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail: -I think the best thing is to let this nomination slide for the time being as there is no movement. I am actually interested in doing it myself but can't see that happening for a monht or two, so maybe I will wokr on it and nominate it myself sometime. Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:23, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Casliber. I'm unclear why it was nominated if there was no interest in correcting the issues.—RJH (talk) 18:28, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
PS: As a postscript, I think the concerns I raised are fixed now. As I haven't done any active editing. I'm happy to take a closer look and review when put up again. I'll try and give it a shove toward FAC if I can and look to think what else might be of help. Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:21, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you again Casliber.—RJH (talk) 18:34, 10 December 2010 (UTC)
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