Talk:Mercedes-Benz CLK GTR/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:29, 29 December 2022 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:29, 29 December 2022 (UTC)

Alles gut. Lass dir zeit. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 08:28, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

Sturmvogel 66 You gonna do it or? X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 03:08, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

Patience, grasshopper!

• Link amidships, bore, stroke, titanium, throttle, shock and damper, bespoke, sultan of Brunei

   Done. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• Suggest not abbreviating engine hp conversion so that readers will see metric horsepower instead of PS and and add |lk=on to the template to add a link to each term

   Not done I opted not to remove the abbreviations for the conversions. Whilst Wikipedia is aimed at a broad audience with little to no prior knowledge regarding a topic, a courtesy link should be suffice.  Done lk=on added to each cvt template. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

  Fair enough.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:35, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• Same for the newton template

   Done. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• Add "transmission" to sequential manual

   Done I assume you meant in the infobox. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

  Sorry, I should have specified in the specification section.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:35, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• , but would retire ... "had to" retire

   Done. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• Paul Frère, former racing driver and motoring journalist, writing for Road & Track magazine drove the CLK GTR around the Hockenheimring, awkward

   Done Sentence reworded & split. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• De link the second link to sequential transmission

   Done. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• Not sure that changes in paint jobs is actually notable

   Done The red chassis was always quite popular in the car community; it is fine if it doesn't meet notability. Removed. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• The race information needs to be sourced

   Done. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• Nice job--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:26, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

All done. Apologies for nagging. Thanks for your time. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 09:12, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

• • Not to worry, I do tend to be a little bit slow about starting the reviews. Fix the bit about the transmission and we'll be done here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:35, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

    All done. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 12:35, 9 January 2023 (UTC)