Talk:Meister Verbrauchermarkt

Tone issues

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This article is pretty much a direct translation from de:Meister Verbrauchmarkt so the tone of the history section doesn't sound quite right. Specifically: "The business began operation in 1959, when Ludwig A. Meister converted his mother's shop in Erbendorf into a supermarket on an extended weekend, an idea which he got from the USA" and "Ludwig A. Meister could not turn down the offer".