Talk:Mega Man Maverick Hunter X/GA1
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Reviewer: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 14:57, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
Starting this off, I feel the main starting paragraph of "Plot" needs to be fleshed out. Why did they rebel? Who are X and Vile? These feel like they should be explained to us at the beginning.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 14:57, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
@Kung Fu Man: Done.Tintor2 (talk) 15:07, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
Did a copyedit on the Plot section, but the OVA paragraph...you'll want to take a look there, not sure what happened with some of the sentences?--Kung Fu Man (talk) 15:20, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
- Alright, after further copy edit everything looks good. Did a spotcheck on references [4], [34], [36] and [42] with no concerns. Passing.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 04:49, 10 March 2024 (UTC)