Talk:Maybe This Christmas/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:51, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   Allmusic is not so reliable regarding genres and dates, so it is better to replace it. New Age and Christmas does not seem to fit; New Age is more esoterical

   What has Jul (Norway) anything to do with the album?

   There are a bit too much quotes in the first section; try rewording with your own words or use indirect speech. Eg " as "[painful]"" could be surely "as painful"

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Hold--Kürbis (✔) 11:17, 10 September 2012 (UTC)

   Pass/Fail:

• I removed New Age, but surely Christmas is applicable. --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
• Removed "July (Norway)" in the See also section. (I had previously thought someone might want more information about the Norwegian tradition given the sentence or two about Little Christmas Eve.) --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
• Corrected "painful". I removed quotation marks from "shuffling beat"--I think this is a musical term and not a descriptor. Similarly, I replaced "down-tempo" with a linked version of downtempo, replacing a descriptor with a musical term. --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)

• I will pass it now. Meets criteria. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 13:16, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks for your time. Much appreciated! --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:14, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

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