Talk:Matt Moore (baseball)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:53, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Will review MWright96 (talk) 19:53, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead edit
- "Moore chose to sign with them rather than attend the University of New Mexico, where he had previously committed." - think you might want to clarify Moore had originally committed to play college baseball for those wondering
- "Moore struggled in his second season with the Giants," - struggled with his playing technique/form?
- Wikilink bullpen to the relevant article
- "but he had to be shut down after suffering a knee injury during his second game of the year." - what does shut down mean in this instance?
Early life edit
- "Moore was born on June 18, 1989, in Fort Walton Beach, Florida." - birth date needs a reliable source to verify it since the Albuquerque Journal does not mention it
- "The family moved to Edgewood," - wording is a little too close to the source material
- Wikilink scout to the appropriate article in the second paragraph
Minor leagues edit
Tampa Bay Rays edit
- The extra wikilinks for shutout and New York Yankees need to be removed
- "He recovered in time for his first major league start on September 22," - recovered from what?
- "Moore started with the Rays in 2012 as part of a five-man starting rotation" - began and player, respectively
- Wikilink disabled list to the relevant article only on the first mention
- "Before being shut down for the season," - how about Before his season ended early, or something similar to make it more understandable?
- "striking out 27.1% of the batters he faced in April" - the symbol % should be spelt out per MOS:PERCENT
San Francisco Giants edit
- "After reports emerged that Moore would be wearing No. 55 with the Giants," - the template No. should be added to the text in bold
- "2017 proved to be the worst season of Moore's career." - The 2017 season proved to be the worst of Moore's career.
Texas Rangers edit
- Texas Rangers doesn't need to be linked here since its already linked earlier in the main prose
- Wikilink bullpen to the relevant article
Detroit Tigers edit
- Detroit Tigers doesn't need to be linked here since its already linked earlier in the main prose
- "in the hopes that he would follow Mike Fiers as a low-risk pitcher heading into a rebound season." - in anticipation
- Wikilink bunt to the appropriate article
Pitcher profile edit
- Baseball America and the term cutter don't need to be linked since they already are earlier in the article
- "Early in his career, sports journalists predicted that Moore would become the Rays' ace thanks to his strong pitch repertoire and velocity." - because of his
- Wikilink strike zone
- "which has led to questions of pitch control" - questions by whom?
Shall put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query each of the points raised in this review MWright96 (talk) 11:06, 23 May 2021 (UTC)