Talk:Markelle Fultz/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

High school career

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  • "all-boys college-prep private school," - I understand what this means but it should be written as "college-preparatory"
  • "As a 5-foot, 9-inch sophomore," - use the convert template on 5-foot, 9-inch
  • "then-assistant coach Cory McCrae said" - THE MOS discourages use of the word "then" in this case
  • "he measured 6 feet, 3 inches." - same as the second point
  • Wikilink MVP to Most valuable player

References

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  • There is no access date to Reference 15
  • References 16, 17, 18, 19 & 21 are missing their author(s)
  • Reference 24 is missing Associated Press as the agency

A very good article overall. Just the minor nibbles from me. MWright96 (talk) 11:52, 20 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

MWright96 I believe I addressed the points you raised. Thank you for your compliment on the article.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 03:30, 21 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
    • Yes, everything has been addressed correctly. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)Reply