Talk:Marge Simpson in: "Screaming Yellow Honkers"/GA1

GA Review

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  • Good work overall. A couple minor comments:
  • In the final paragraph of the "Plot" section, some uses of "Rhinoceros" are capitalized, while others aren't. Also, a link to Rhinoceros would be nice.
  • Convert the title of ref #6 to title or sentence case.

On-hold for now. Cheers, –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 18:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

All done. Qst (talk) 19:09, 8 September 2008 (UTC)Reply