Talk:Marching Men/GA1
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Reviewer: Maclean25 (talk · contribs) 05:51, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
- Good article review (see Wikipedia:What is a good article? for criteria)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Two images used (both hosted on the Commons): File:Marching Men Cover.jpg tagged as cc-by-sa and File:Marching Men Advertisement.jpg tagged as public domain.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Comments/Questions
- In the lead, can "Today, Marching Men is largely forgotten..." be re-phrased. It seems to be close to Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch#Relative time references. The lead should only be summarizing what is already in the article, is this sentence a summary of something more thoroughly covered in the article?
- Perhaps Great Man theory would be a good wikilink for "Emersonian Great Man"
- Can you add a quote from the novel? Nothing quite communicates the novel's style like a quote directly from the text.
- This article covers all the major aspects and is competently written. Perhaps the fact that it is written in the third-person should be included into the article as it describes part of the writing style. Otherwise, it meets the GA criteria and I am comfortable with passing it. maclean (talk) 00:33, 25 May 2012 (UTC)