Talk:Maldives at the 1996 Summer Olympics/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LunaEatsTuna in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 23:51, 18 February 2023 (UTC)Reply


I will review this (hopefully) tomorrow. LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 23:51, 18 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Nice work on another great Maldivian olympics article! You know the drill by now :) LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 22:38, 19 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
@LunaEatsTuna all done :) -- EN-Jungwon 07:38, 20 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Nice work! Happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats, LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 18:11, 20 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Copyvio check

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Earwig says good to go.

Files

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All images used are relevant, of acceptable quality and copyright-free:

File:Flag of Maldives.svg (if I had a dollar for every time I typed this, I would have four dollars. Which does not sound like a lot but it is weird that it happened four times): valid public domain rationale;
File:Athletics venue during the 1996 Paralympic Games.jpg: CC-BY-SA 3.0;
File:Georgia Tech CRC Front.jpg: CC-BY-SA 2.5.

Prose

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  • "The delegation's participation in the Athens Olympics" – Athens?
  • "in Seoul, South Korea." – wikilink Seoul.
  • Wikilink the athletes names in the lead and their first mentions in the body.
  • "Amir ranked 55th out 58 athletes" missing of.
  • "Therefore, that was the end of his competition. Therefore, he did not progress to the quarter-finals." – awkward sentencing.
  • "Like Mohamed Amir" – just Amir is fine.
  • "The men's 4 × 400 m relay team" – change to "The men's 4 × 400 metres relay team" for consistency (the table at the bottom is fine though).
  • "and they were eliminated from competition." – is this right or should it be "the competition."?
  • "René Makosso (30.00 seconds) who placed third" – missing a comma.
  • Efn note e "and one athlete, Tina Paulino did not start." is also missing a comma.

Refs

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Passes spotcheck on refs 1, 2, 3, 5, 13 and 16.

Formatting
  • Refs 8 and 9 needs retrieval dates.

Other

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Short desc, External links, infobox, ALT text, navs, other templates and cats look good to go.

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