Talk:Lydford Castle/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 06:41, 11 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

I'll start this one shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:41, 11 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • passed to the Duchy of Cornwall, who would own it until Wouldn't "who owned it until" be a more direct phrasing. Or this: time, being repeatedly "time, was repeatedly"
  • Typo isolatedm and here: protected by a the ramparts
  • This is awkward: From the end of the 12th century the output of tin was increasing efforts were taken to extend the regulation and generate more revenue for the Crown.
  • And this: The courtroom included a chair for the Stannary court judge, with railing around the outside