Talk:Louis Crews/GA1
Latest comment: 8 months ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 23:35, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
edit- Added college basketball coaches in the US due to there being no Jarvis coaches cat and added Yale alumni cat.
- In the lead should there be a comma after Lewis?
Done
- Actually, I don't think noting that there was sometimes misspelling is that important for the lead - I removed that part.
- Shouldn't we include the womens basketball championships in the infobox?
- Added.
- Infobox says when they won the two titles but body doesn't. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- Added.
- Infobox says when they won the two titles but body doesn't. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- Added.
- And the Alcorn and Albama baseball also since the football SIAC is included. Done
- Added.
- unlink Southern Intercollegiate Athletic Conference in later life. Its already linked in the body. Done
- Delinked.
- What's the Lewis Crews Classic? Done
- Explained.
- Can we expand a little more and say its the first home game of every season. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- Added.
- Can we expand a little more and say its the first home game of every season. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- Explained.
- Where are the Javier records from in the record table? Done
- Jarvis Christian? Here - should I add it in as a ref?
- There's already a ref at the end of the table so yes add ref 2 also.
- Added.
- There's already a ref at the end of the table so yes add ref 2 also.
- Jarvis Christian? Here - should I add it in as a ref?
- Do you think we should say something about all three of those schools being historically black? Idk Done
- Eh, I don't think its needed, but I can add it if you want.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:05, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:56, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- "the women's basketball team to two championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) crown in 1953." Having SCAC on just the baseball part makes it sound like the basketball titles weren't SCAC. Were they? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:11, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: I would assume the basketball titles were SCAC, as the men's team at least were in the SCAC and I don't think I've seen an instance were the men were one conference and women the other, so I changed the wording to
and led the women's basketball team to two South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a SCAC title in 1953
— does that work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: I would assume the basketball titles were SCAC, as the men's team at least were in the SCAC and I don't think I've seen an instance were the men were one conference and women the other, so I changed the wording to
All issues have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)