Talk:Los Nietos, Cartagena

Composition of the article

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The composition does not have with an encyclopedic style and there are not enough coherence and connection. The first paragraph is about the village; the next one about a coastal salty lagoon next to the village named Mar Menor; the third has information about La Manga, which is another spot and the only fact it has in common with Los Nietos is the adjacency to the lagoon; fourth paragraph is about Los Alcázares, another place adjoining Mar Menor, fifth paragraph is about a village that is not even next to Mar Menor, but close to it and the last one is about villages in the coastline of the lagoon.