Talk:Linda Syddick Napaltjarri/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mephiston999 (talk) 22:58, 1 March 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Comments

Lead

• The lead does not summarize the entire article adequately. Please expand it and make sure that all the main aspects of the article are present in the lead.
• Can an appropriate infobox be found, I'm sure you can find an infobox for an artist.

Life

•  Done Decrease size of image.

Art

Background

•  Done Link acrylic paints
•  Done men of central Australia to women painting ..... men of central Australia towards women painting
•  Done and in the 1990s large numbers of them ..... and in the 1990s a large number of them

Career

•  Done when works by her were hung in a private gallery ... when her works were hung in a private gallery.
•  Done Disambiguation of Dreaming.

Miscellaneous

• It would be great to add a picture of her or of one of her works.
•  Done Persondata must be added, see WP:PDATA for more info.
• Be consistent with dates format in the reference section.

Overall a good article, just a few issues to address and I shall pass it. Mephiston999 (talk) 23:38, 1 March 2010 (UTC)