Talk:Leslie Andrew/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 13:25, 5 April 2013 (UTC)

Will try and get to this some time on the w/e... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 13:25, 5 April 2013 (UTC)

Toolbox check

• Fixed a dab link (typo really).
• No EL issues.

Prose -- performed my usual copyedit, let me know if any issues.

Structure/detail/referencing -- all look fine.

Supporting materials

• Infobox looks good.
• File:Maj L Andrew.jpg -- can't see on site where this is CC-SA, looks like CC-BY according to what documentation I could find there
• File:VCLeslieWiltonAndrewGrave.jpg -- if permission to use has been granted, I think we might need some evidence...

Summary -- all in all, looks good, but may need some clarity re. the images. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:10, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

Have updated the licence for the first image (I think I found the same page you must have identified for the CC-BY licence). The other image came over from the Victoria Cross Reference site; not sure how to find evidence so have opted to remove it. Zawed (talk) 08:57, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

And thanks for the review (and the ce - I see I have a few bad habits to work on...) Zawed (talk) 08:58, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

Not at all, you're doing fine, it's great to see another biographer of Commonwealth soldiers. Perhaps we should collaborate some time on getting Charles Upham to GA (or beyond) -- I have Mark of the Lion somewhere and have added bits from it to the article in the past... In the meantime, consider this as passed -- well done and keep it up! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 13:11, 17 April 2013 (UTC)