Talk:Leduc 022/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 22:34, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Can attend to shortly Eddie891 Talk Work 22:34, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Sources look reliable, prepared to AGF
  • Is it standard to capitalize "throughout the Fifties " ?
  • Yes, unless you're using the digits instead.
  • It's not immediately clear to me what "Intended for service use," service refers to here-- remember that all work in the armed services can be called "service"
  • I don't understand "and a time to 25,000 metres (82,000 ft) of only seven minutes." -- if it's just me being dull, feel free to explain here instead of in the article
  • See if my change makes it any clearer
  • Any information on the cost of the prototype?
  • Is it really worth putting the sentence under 'Surviving aircraft' as a bullet point?
  • MOS:ELLAYOUT recommends accompanying an entry in the 'external links' section with a brief description if it isn't clear what it is
  • Indeed it does.
That's anything from me Eddie891 Talk Work 01:18, 11 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for taking the time to review it, see if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:47, 29 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Eddie891:--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 31 March 2021 (UTC)Reply