Talk:Leanna Cavanagh/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:12, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• The use of "young age" in the second paragraph of the lead feels repetitive.
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• "her mother died at a young age" - was her mother young when she died or did she die when Leanna was young? Clarify.
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "as a troublemaker".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "reconcile".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "time off from school".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "the party".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "situation to Liam".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• "have been" → "had been"
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Recite references at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE.
  • Are there particular places where sentences with quote(s) aren't recited? I can't see any; I can see a bunch of sentences that use multiple quotes but they are derived from the same cite at the end of the sentence? – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

@DarkGlow: After "[her] remark" and for "floods of hate" in #Reception. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:50, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

 Done now! That's the section I wrote prior to learning of WP:QUOTE LOL. – DarkGlow • 20:54, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

• References are archived.
• Websites are linked.
• Everything else looks good.
  • Thank you! – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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