Talk:LLA Azteca Championship/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Going to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Infobox

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  • Use the plainlist template in the promotion field of the infobox so that CMLL and LLA appear in a unbulleted list

Lead

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  • "It was sponsored by TV Azteca Noreste, that televised all championship matches" - who
  • "as it changed hands each time LLA/ CMLL promoted a title match." - LLA and CMLL
  • "who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - If Mistico was born in 1991, he would have been 20 or 21 when he won the title, correct?

Background

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  • "that are used in the storylines presented on their shows, they are not won as result" - the comma should be replaced by a semi-colom
  • "but the outcome of the matches are pre-determined by their promoters." - better: but their outcome are pre-determined by promoters.
  • "The championship is represented by a belt for the champion to wear" - incumbent holder
  • "and by 2009 it was decided to create the "Azteca Championship" - and by 2009, had deided to create the "Azteca Championship",
  • The entire second background is lacking reliable source(s)

History

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  • "The Azteca Championship was created in late 2009 with a one-night tournament" - as
  • "with two six-man tag team matches to reduce the field from 12 to 6." - 12 to 6 wrestlers
  • "The semi-final match was a torneo cibernetico elimination match" - event
  • "with three wrestlers in the ring at the same time." - concurrently.
  • "who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - same issue as the third query in the lede
  • "The last champions was Místico," - champion

Title history

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  • Monterrey, Nuevo León should be wikilinked the first time it is mentioned, not the sixth

Champion age at title win, youngest to oldest

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  • "Místico: 19–20 years" - same query as the third one in the lede and the fifth one in the history section

References

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  • References 3, 15 and 17 are lacking access dates

That is all of the queries I have. Going to put the review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 16:04, 24 February 2019 (UTC)Reply