Talk:Krusty Gets Busted/GA2

GA Review

Looking good. Just a few things that need to be done before this can get to GA:

• a lot of scenes had to be cut - not a necessity, but "many" sounds a lot nicer than "a lot" :)
• Maybe specify that the acts of the episodes are defined by the placement of the commercial breaks (I'm assuming), as the ordinary reader wouldn't know.

• Could you give a more informative caption to the Sideshow Bob image under Production, so that the image accompanies the critical commentary about his re-design and meets the fair use criteria better?
• Italicise The Prisoner, Mission: Impossible and Scooby Doo just like The Simpsons would be.
• "Krusty Gets Busted" finished 13th place in the weekly ratings - spell out "thirteenth" as it's a small number.
• It’s hard for me to relate any deficiencies." and added that "almost every Bob episode - remove the full-stop/period at the end of the first quote so it's a continuous sentence.

Otherwise, good work - I'll put the GAN on hold for a week so changes can be made. The article hasn't got far to go. —97198 (talk) 13:04, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing! I have made some edits now so let me know what you think. =) TheLeftorium 13:40, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Awesome, well done. I'll go ahead and pass the article :) —97198 (talk) 06:19, 16 September 2008 (UTC)