Talk:Korean influence on Japanese culture/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: StoryKai (talk · contribs) 05:43, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I will examine the quality of this article within one week.StoryKai (talk) 05:43, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

@TH1980:Thanks for all your hard work on this. I don't have too much to criticize. I recommend the following changes...​ ​​

--"the building of gigantic tomb"="Tomb" should be pluralized.​ ​​

--"Yamato kingdom has sent military expeditions"=Delete "has".​ ​​

--"Kingdom of Baekje in 538 AD"=Most of the article uses CE, and this should too.​ ​

--The paragraph starting with "According to the historian Beatrix von" cites the same source three times, though one citation would suffice.​ ​​

However, the biggest problem is the inconsistency of the citations. Some of the Farris citations are in brackets for some reason. Some citations have google view over the pages numbers and others don't. Also, the titles of many books in the bibliography aren't italicized. StoryKai (talk) 03:12, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Many thanks. I've begun making the changes you've recommended.TH1980 (talk) 01:43, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

I have finished implementing your recomended changes. Many thanks for your input.TH1980 (talk) 01:14, 6 July 2020 (UTC)